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Aeowar Mage
Posts : 89 Points : 49464 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-11-10 Age : 32 Location : Malaysia
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Fri Nov 26, 2010 7:53 pm | |
| I can't tell if it's a girl at first either, but looking at it properly tells me it is one. The problem is two-fold. First "her" face doesn't look like a girl's face. It just doesn't have the vibe. The lack of eye lashes, and the relatively big jaw are contributing factors. Hair doesn't necessarily convey that the person is female, as in these days, even guys have the same sort of hairstyle as girls.
The other problem is the lack of feminine traits on the body. It could probably be the clothes being thick, or it could be that you haven't gotten a good grasp of the curves of a female body, but none-the-less, as the face isn't feminine enough on it's own, a non-feminine looking body would make things worse. The only thing that told me that this could be a girl is the skirt, based on the assumption that people traditionally do not draw males wearing long skirt-like clothing. The skirt itself is too stiff.
Her legs may also be slightly short. But people can be like that.
I don't know if you do this, but I suggest you really look at how a real female body looks like. Not that I'm suggesting you go watch pornography however lol | |
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karoi_neko Sorcerer
Posts : 122 Points : 49688 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-10-23 Age : 30 Location : Wonderful Wonderland
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:26 pm | |
| i agree with Aeowar-san it can hardly seem as a girl bcoz there isnt much of the feminine figure OwO | |
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Soul Mage
Posts : 96 Points : 49715 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-10-18
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Sat Nov 27, 2010 12:53 am | |
| i agree with you even i, when drawing, i see a huge weird of it but i need an advise so thanks for the advise | |
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Aeowar Mage
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| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Sat Nov 27, 2010 7:21 am | |
| You're welcome, it's no big deal. I'm finding it extremely hard to find someone to give me advice. | |
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Soul Mage
Posts : 96 Points : 49715 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-10-18
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Sun Nov 28, 2010 5:26 am | |
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Soul Mage
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| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Fri Dec 03, 2010 11:09 am | |
| what do you think about this drawing? | |
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Jery Dragneel Shadow Mage
Posts : 285 Points : 49945 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-10-19 Age : 30 Location : chaotic world
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Fri Dec 03, 2010 2:12 pm | |
| good but i confuse with the cloth | |
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Jery Dragneel Shadow Mage
Posts : 285 Points : 49945 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-10-19 Age : 30 Location : chaotic world
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Fri Dec 03, 2010 2:14 pm | |
| oh now i understand nice job soul keep up the good work u may surpass yuuki one day | |
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Yuuki_Akashi Warlock
Posts : 704 Points : 50582 Reputation : 6 Join date : 2010-10-14 Age : 29 Location : Yuuki's Dream World
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Fri Dec 03, 2010 4:36 pm | |
| looks like someone gonna change class~ hahahha XDD THIS IS SOO GOOD ^^ GOOD JOB! | |
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karoi_neko Sorcerer
Posts : 122 Points : 49688 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-10-23 Age : 30 Location : Wonderful Wonderland
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Fri Dec 03, 2010 4:50 pm | |
| wow, nice job soul-kun! XD i liike the way you lineart this! oh and the guy looks so delicious, i mean handsome! may i eat him? | |
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Yuuki_Akashi Warlock
Posts : 704 Points : 50582 Reputation : 6 Join date : 2010-10-14 Age : 29 Location : Yuuki's Dream World
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Fri Dec 03, 2010 4:51 pm | |
| control your self~ hahahhaha and you can eat him is if you want~
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tifa Shadow Mage
Posts : 221 Points : 49735 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-11-04 Age : 31 Location : wonderland
| Subject: huhu Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:44 am | |
| sory if my cmmnt will hurt u.. urm that guy look like old to me.. mybe becoz the line that u draw below the eye.
but this art r better than other art~! gud job~!!! keep it up boy~!!
go go go soul~!!! xD | |
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Soul Mage
Posts : 96 Points : 49715 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-10-18
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:03 am | |
| jerydragneel: thank you but i do not mind if i surpass him
Yuuki_Akashi: but when i see my profile it is just the same class... just kidding. i does not matter and thank you for the compliment
karoi_neko: thanks but i suggest not to eat him. hahaha
tifa: thanks for the advise i agree with you about the oldness of this character and that what i want to draw thanks hahaha | |
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Aeowar Mage
Posts : 89 Points : 49464 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-11-10 Age : 32 Location : Malaysia
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:50 am | |
| Actually, I would beg to differ on a three things here.
Firstly, his face looks flat. You may argue that it's because it lacks colour, and definitely, it's partly true due to that. However, his left eye placement is the main offender. Human eyes are slightly sunken into the eye sockets(look at how a skull would look and work from there).
Next, I find issue with his jaw. For reference, you see the point of the chin, and look at the line that goes towards the ear from there. There is two points in between the chin and the ear, no? The one closest to the chin is a bit off. It makes the fella look like he has a very unnaturally square jaw, unless that's your intention.
Lastly, his left shoulder looks unnatural. However, when I look closely, it's actually fine. The problem therein lies with that line you drew there. It is far too straight.
Asides from all that, it is a nice attempt. | |
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Yuuki_Akashi Warlock
Posts : 704 Points : 50582 Reputation : 6 Join date : 2010-10-14 Age : 29 Location : Yuuki's Dream World
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Sat Dec 04, 2010 4:00 pm | |
| hmmmmm~ yea~ you right... well i always cant notice it until our one and only Aoewar told about it~! thanx aoewar!! I love your eyes~! | |
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Soul Mage
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| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:49 pm | |
| really? well, who can argue about the right thing, right? thanks for the advise | |
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Soul Mage
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| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Thu Dec 09, 2010 2:27 pm | |
| i drawing this just to spend some time have a happy comment and a nice day comment gently, i hope | |
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Yuuki_Akashi Warlock
Posts : 704 Points : 50582 Reputation : 6 Join date : 2010-10-14 Age : 29 Location : Yuuki's Dream World
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Thu Dec 09, 2010 2:48 pm | |
| the face look kinda weird~ by the way..is that mastang from FMA...?? | |
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Jery Dragneel Shadow Mage
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| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Thu Dec 09, 2010 2:52 pm | |
| yea he look like roy mustang but his hair not like that haha | |
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Yuuki_Akashi Warlock
Posts : 704 Points : 50582 Reputation : 6 Join date : 2010-10-14 Age : 29 Location : Yuuki's Dream World
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Thu Dec 09, 2010 3:50 pm | |
| the left eye..its need repair..and how about you try to color it..im sure its gonna looks much cooler~ | |
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Redryuga Sorcerer
Posts : 193 Points : 49854 Reputation : 6 Join date : 2010-10-14 Age : 29 Location : Dark World
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Thu Dec 09, 2010 8:00 pm | |
| his hair look like yuuki in real life.. | |
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Soul Mage
Posts : 96 Points : 49715 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-10-18
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Thu Dec 09, 2010 8:54 pm | |
| does it really looks like roy mustang? i do not notice it well practice makes perfect! and it maybe have a hair just like yuuki in real life hahaha | |
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Aeowar Mage
Posts : 89 Points : 49464 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-11-10 Age : 32 Location : Malaysia
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Thu Dec 09, 2010 10:33 pm | |
| It is in my opinion that this drawing is passable as opposed to all other ones before this. While there may be some "flaws" here and there, it's usually due to subjective opinion. The eyes are fine really. And he doesn't remind me of Roy because he doesn't look like him.
The only little problem is that the area where the jaw and ear meet looks odd. You could smoothen the lines into one instead of the three separate lines at that area. Also the scalp, where the hair starts from in the front of the character is not agreeable for me. The scalp looked pretty much like a straight line, which is not like a place where a bunch of hair came from. | |
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Ha chan Alchemist
Posts : 488 Points : 50196 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-10-17 Age : 27 Location : selangor kkb
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Fri Dec 10, 2010 2:57 am | |
| if ur colour it i think it'l be more perfect | |
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Soul Mage
Posts : 96 Points : 49715 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-10-18
| Subject: Re: Soul's Art Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:28 am | |
| aeowar: ohh... that is really good advice thanks!
ha chan: really? i do not completely understand about colouring but i will try my best thanks! | |
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