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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 8:17 pm

THIS IS MY FIRST COLOURED DRAWING IN THE NET!
so be gentle when you are commenting...

this is the sketch drawing
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and this is the coloured drawing
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HAVE A HAPPY COMMENT!!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 8:37 pm

well, all i could say is that he's thumb doesnt look like a thumb, correct that one
and there are some shades that you didnt shade...
there some mistake but i think you did a good job for a first time ^w^
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 8:51 pm

Thumb is disjointed.

For your first time, the colour job is okay.

The rest is good to go. Good work.
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 11:13 pm

well...
thank you
this is a very great thing for me
i will try harder next time
haha
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 11:54 pm

The tumb gonna get thumb down from me.. But over all..it's look good~ love the color~
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 8:41 am

huwo
cool lol~
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 11:31 am

thanks
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PostSubject: huhu   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 7:13 pm

wow~!!!
u good in colour~!!
good job!!^^
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 15, 2010 5:34 pm

thank you for the compliment
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PostSubject: haha   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 15, 2010 5:37 pm

ur welcome~!!
xD
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 16, 2010 7:13 pm

what do you think about this drawing?
i just want to learn about shadowing
can you give me something that can make a maybe perfect shadow for a drawing?

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 16, 2010 10:19 pm

As a drawing it's okay. But I noticed that his shoulders are badly drawn. Best way to fix it is to do away with the collarbones that showed from the collar opening, so that it doesn't look like he has dislocated shoulders.
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 17, 2010 7:58 am

ohh!
ok
thanks for the advise! i will do my best!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 17, 2010 8:45 am

wow!
this time ur make it great!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 17, 2010 7:06 pm

really?!
thank you for the compliment!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 22, 2010 9:07 pm

ATTENTION!

Can you tell me which one you like and dislike.
Then tell me why you do not like about the character.
Thank you.

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PostSubject: :)   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 22, 2010 11:01 pm

i like guy at the middle..
y?
i dunno..
hehe..!

n i dislike guy on the left..
mayb becoz his eye looks weird..?
mayb..
hohoho..
=_='
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 23, 2010 12:30 am

The two tiny ones are crap. The rest are good.
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 23, 2010 7:08 am

Aeowar wrote:
The two tiny ones are crap.

ohh Aoewar, please try to not break any heart with your words ok XDDD


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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 23, 2010 7:11 am

yaa..u word i think are to..to..ahhh...watever
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 23, 2010 10:27 am

do not be anger with him
i do not mind
thanks for the compliment and comment
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 23, 2010 12:27 pm

im not angry...im laughing hahaha
simple but mean and funny ^^

ohh not like im agree with him...just the words is soo funny
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 23, 2010 8:00 pm

I have no intention of being mean. You have yet to see me get seriously mean. Words like "crap" does not exist in my mean vocabulary dictionary.
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 24, 2010 11:18 am

well yea its not that mean ^^
but still funny hahahhaha
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Soul's Art - Page 5 I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 25, 2010 10:25 am

i know "crap" is not mean but i thought you were angry
so end of the story
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