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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Nov 26, 2010 7:53 pm

I can't tell if it's a girl at first either, but looking at it properly tells me it is one. The problem is two-fold. First "her" face doesn't look like a girl's face. It just doesn't have the vibe. The lack of eye lashes, and the relatively big jaw are contributing factors. Hair doesn't necessarily convey that the person is female, as in these days, even guys have the same sort of hairstyle as girls.

The other problem is the lack of feminine traits on the body. It could probably be the clothes being thick, or it could be that you haven't gotten a good grasp of the curves of a female body, but none-the-less, as the face isn't feminine enough on it's own, a non-feminine looking body would make things worse. The only thing that told me that this could be a girl is the skirt, based on the assumption that people traditionally do not draw males wearing long skirt-like clothing. The skirt itself is too stiff.

Her legs may also be slightly short. But people can be like that.

I don't know if you do this, but I suggest you really look at how a real female body looks like. Not that I'm suggesting you go watch pornography however lol
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:26 pm

i agree with Aeowar-san
it can hardly seem as a girl
bcoz there isnt much of the feminine figure OwO
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sat Nov 27, 2010 12:53 am

i agree with you
even i, when drawing, i see a huge weird of it
but i need an advise
so thanks for the advise
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sat Nov 27, 2010 7:21 am

You're welcome, it's no big deal. I'm finding it extremely hard to find someone to give me advice.
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sun Nov 28, 2010 5:26 am

agree!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Dec 03, 2010 11:09 am

what do you think about this drawing?

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Dec 03, 2010 2:12 pm

good but i confuse with the cloth
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Dec 03, 2010 2:14 pm

oh now i understand nice job soul keep up the good work u may surpass yuuki one day
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Dec 03, 2010 4:36 pm

looks like someone gonna change class~
hahahha XDD
THIS IS SOO GOOD ^^
GOOD JOB!

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Dec 03, 2010 4:50 pm

wow, nice job soul-kun! XD
i liike the way you lineart this!
oh and the guy looks so delicious, i mean handsome!
may i eat him?
puppy eyes
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Dec 03, 2010 4:51 pm

control your self~
hahahhaha and you can eat him is if you want~

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PostSubject: huhu   Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:44 am

sory if my cmmnt will hurt u..
urm that guy look like old to me..
mybe becoz the line that u draw below the eye.

but this art r better than other art~!
gud job~!!!
keep it up boy~!!

go go go soul~!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:03 am

jerydragneel:
thank you but i do not mind if i surpass him

Yuuki_Akashi:
but when i see my profile it is just the same class...
just kidding. i does not matter and thank you for the compliment

karoi_neko:
thanks but i suggest not to eat him.
hahaha

tifa:
thanks for the advise
i agree with you about the oldness of this character and that what i want to draw
thanks hahaha
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:50 am

Actually, I would beg to differ on a three things here.

Firstly, his face looks flat. You may argue that it's because it lacks colour, and definitely, it's partly true due to that. However, his left eye placement is the main offender. Human eyes are slightly sunken into the eye sockets(look at how a skull would look and work from there).

Next, I find issue with his jaw. For reference, you see the point of the chin, and look at the line that goes towards the ear from there. There is two points in between the chin and the ear, no? The one closest to the chin is a bit off. It makes the fella look like he has a very unnaturally square jaw, unless that's your intention.

Lastly, his left shoulder looks unnatural. However, when I look closely, it's actually fine. The problem therein lies with that line you drew there. It is far too straight.

Asides from all that, it is a nice attempt.
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sat Dec 04, 2010 4:00 pm

hmmmmm~ yea~ you right...
well i always cant notice it until our one and only Aoewar told about it~!
thanx aoewar!! I love your eyes~!

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:49 pm

really?
well, who can argue about the right thing, right?
thanks for the advise
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Thu Dec 09, 2010 2:27 pm

i drawing this just to spend some time
have a happy comment and a nice day
comment gently, i hope

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Thu Dec 09, 2010 2:48 pm

the face look kinda weird~
by the way..is that mastang from FMA...??

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Thu Dec 09, 2010 2:52 pm

yea he look like roy mustang but his hair not like that haha
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Thu Dec 09, 2010 3:50 pm

the left eye..its need repair..and how about you try to color it..im sure its gonna looks much cooler~

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Thu Dec 09, 2010 8:00 pm

his hair look like yuuki in real life..
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Thu Dec 09, 2010 8:54 pm

does it really looks like roy mustang?
i do not notice it
well practice makes perfect!
and it maybe have a hair just like yuuki in real life
hahaha
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Thu Dec 09, 2010 10:33 pm

It is in my opinion that this drawing is passable as opposed to all other ones before this. While there may be some "flaws" here and there, it's usually due to subjective opinion. The eyes are fine really. And he doesn't remind me of Roy because he doesn't look like him.

The only little problem is that the area where the jaw and ear meet looks odd. You could smoothen the lines into one instead of the three separate lines at that area. Also the scalp, where the hair starts from in the front of the character is not agreeable for me. The scalp looked pretty much like a straight line, which is not like a place where a bunch of hair came from.
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Dec 10, 2010 2:57 am

if ur colour it
i think
it'l be more perfect

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:28 am

aeowar:
ohh... that is really good advice
thanks!

ha chan:
really? i do not completely understand about colouring but i will try my best
thanks!
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