Soul's Art

Chichiro:

thank you!

Redryuga:

did i already said about that?

other than the hand, everything looks ok
however the the cloth thats flying/ blown by wind seems kinda stiff,
need more work on that...

I will try my best!

how about this drawing?

wow, i like his face
it really show that he's fierce to battle..
but something worng with one of the hand
hmm, im not sure
but good job ^^

im agree with karoi

really?
maybe a quick review and a practice will help
thanks about the compliment!

very smooth drawing ^^
but yea..the hand kinda weird

the left arm i think in wrong position......i use to draw samurai 2 years before so im not sure whats wrong.........maybe u draw warrior style not samurai

yea it probably left arm need to improve a bit im sure of it

alright
the problem is the hand so i will practice more
thanks for the advice

ohh why dont you ask sensei for an advice ??
well I always do that~

maybe...
i always draw for my own instinct
i ask him if i have the time

yup you should..
sometimes..the others opinion can make a thing even much batter ^^

THAT IS RIGHT!

It's been a while from the last post
so take a nice view and comment as nice as possible

i love your pose..but i wonder..can you draw female character...??

maybe...
why you ask?

do it now!
XDD

Maybe i will try to make female character

I'm going to put in some comments on your last two drawings(the guy with the sword and the guy with the shield).

First off, the swordsman. Like most people, I find issue with the arm positioning for both arms. It is entirely possible for his left arm to be where it is, but I doubt a real swordsman would be comfortable lifting it that high for a pose like that. Try lowering the arm at the shoulder joint, making it a little over shoulder height, though it can vary. Also the left hand didn't appear to be anatomically possible from the way it's drawn, even though it's perfectly possible.

When it comes to the right arm, before I comment, I need to clear something with you. What is he wearing at the arms? Is it bare arms with a soft glove, or is it armoured gauntlets?

Sans that, everything else is done fine. His face as well. I'm refraining from talking about sword design because it matters little

Next, would be the shieldbearer. His pose is awkward. He will topple over whether he is hit or not in the next couple of seconds. His right arm is disjointed, or at least appears to be so. I will comment on how the shield is inappropriately designed for a medieval themed soldier, as a shield will have a grip for his hand to hold onto while being strapped on at the same time. While strap on shields exist, they are usually much smaller than an aegis type shield, and made of lightweight materials. His neck, or rather, he appears to lack one. Something else is amiss, but I can't put a finger on it.

Keep up the good work and practice though.

wow! a long comment and a good one
thank you for the advise
i will try harder next time

haha
make more practise k

alright

i do not know if this drawing is a right girl...
so... happy comment!