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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:24 am

Chichiro:

thank you!

Redryuga:

did i already said about that?
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:12 pm

other than the hand, everything looks ok
however the the cloth thats flying/ blown by wind seems kinda stiff,
need more work on that...
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:21 pm

I will try my best!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:39 pm

how about this drawing?

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:03 pm

wow, i like his face
it really show that he's fierce to battle..
but something worng with one of the hand
hmm, im not sure
but good job ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Nov 12, 2010 4:51 pm

im agree with karoi

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:18 am

really?
maybe a quick review and a practice will help
thanks about the compliment!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sun Nov 14, 2010 7:54 am

very smooth drawing ^^
but yea..the hand kinda weird

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:36 pm

the left arm i think in wrong position......i use to draw samurai 2 years before so im not sure whats wrong.........maybe u draw warrior style not samurai
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:37 pm

yea it probably left arm need to improve a bit im sure of it
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sun Nov 14, 2010 8:54 pm

alright
the problem is the hand so i will practice more
thanks for the advice
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 15, 2010 8:18 am

ohh why dont you ask sensei for an advice ??
well I always do that~

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 15, 2010 2:11 pm

maybe...
i always draw for my own instinct
i ask him if i have the time
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 15, 2010 2:45 pm

yup you should..
sometimes..the others opinion can make a thing even much batter ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:42 pm

THAT IS RIGHT!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Sun Nov 21, 2010 10:53 pm

It's been a while from the last post
so take a nice view and comment as nice as possible

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 22, 2010 10:27 am

i love your pose..but i wonder..can you draw female character...??

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:35 pm

maybe...
why you ask?
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:42 pm

do it now!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 22, 2010 4:13 pm

err well

Maybe i will try to make female character
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 22, 2010 7:54 pm

I'm going to put in some comments on your last two drawings(the guy with the sword and the guy with the shield).

First off, the swordsman. Like most people, I find issue with the arm positioning for both arms. It is entirely possible for his left arm to be where it is, but I doubt a real swordsman would be comfortable lifting it that high for a pose like that. Try lowering the arm at the shoulder joint, making it a little over shoulder height, though it can vary. Also the left hand didn't appear to be anatomically possible from the way it's drawn, even though it's perfectly possible.

When it comes to the right arm, before I comment, I need to clear something with you. What is he wearing at the arms? Is it bare arms with a soft glove, or is it armoured gauntlets?

Sans that, everything else is done fine. His face as well. I'm refraining from talking about sword design because it matters little Razz

Next, would be the shieldbearer. His pose is awkward. He will topple over whether he is hit or not in the next couple of seconds. His right arm is disjointed, or at least appears to be so. I will comment on how the shield is inappropriately designed for a medieval themed soldier, as a shield will have a grip for his hand to hold onto while being strapped on at the same time. While strap on shields exist, they are usually much smaller than an aegis type shield, and made of lightweight materials. His neck, or rather, he appears to lack one. Something else is amiss, but I can't put a finger on it.

Keep up the good work and practice though.
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 22, 2010 8:26 pm

wow! a long comment and a good one
thank you for the advise
i will try harder next time
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Mon Nov 22, 2010 10:58 pm

haha
make more practise k

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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:07 am

alright good JOB!
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PostSubject: Re: Soul's Art   Fri Nov 26, 2010 5:51 pm

i do not know if this drawing is a right girl...
so... happy comment!

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